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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

This feels like standing at the edge of a dream, right before waking. I’m torn between the cavern’s mystery and the shore’s promise...which path to choose. 🤔🤔🤔

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Thank you! That is beautiful imagery! They are two sides of the same coin. Which side will you land on?!

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Riley K's avatar

I love this! It reminds me of those choose your own adventure books and The Road Not Taken. A voice wonderfully descriptive too. I can’t wait to see how the two realities of this story branch out!

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

I did enjoy the road not taken, it was very thought provoking. Thank you so much! If you love these I have a mystery choose your own adventure as well! I hope you enjoyed both paths! I spent many hours perfecting each of these!

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The Scorched Pages's avatar

And it shows! Keep up the amazing writings!

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The Scorched Pages's avatar

Oh, to be triple blessed, and to love every piece with my whole heart and soul.

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Thank you so much! I am ever so glad you like them! I spent all week perfecting them!

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