Kaaos, this is so haunting and beautiful in equal measure. I love how you integrated the habits of the person who passed into the stanzas. The hesitation in the language was palpable. The fear of blinking and them being gone, all of it was so real. This was so beautiful, my friend.
Such kind words Bradley! Thank you so much! I struggled a bit with this piece, it didn't turn out quite like I thought it would but your words have restored my faith in myself as always! Grief takes so many shapes for so many different people! This is the shape of grief breaking ones mind! Thank you again my friend for showing me even when it doesn't turn out exactly as you envisioned, it is still just as beautiful! 🩵
Kaaos, this is so haunting and beautiful in equal measure. I love how you integrated the habits of the person who passed into the stanzas. The hesitation in the language was palpable. The fear of blinking and them being gone, all of it was so real. This was so beautiful, my friend.
Such kind words Bradley! Thank you so much! I struggled a bit with this piece, it didn't turn out quite like I thought it would but your words have restored my faith in myself as always! Grief takes so many shapes for so many different people! This is the shape of grief breaking ones mind! Thank you again my friend for showing me even when it doesn't turn out exactly as you envisioned, it is still just as beautiful! 🩵
Oofff... what a stab through the heart. This what just beautiful.
Thank you so much! Hopefully not fatal. 🩵
Almost… but then I wouldn't be able to read all your wonderful writings 🥰
WOW! This is so ethereal and so real at the same time.
Thank you so much! 🩵