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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Kaaos, this is so haunting and beautiful in equal measure. I love how you integrated the habits of the person who passed into the stanzas. The hesitation in the language was palpable. The fear of blinking and them being gone, all of it was so real. This was so beautiful, my friend.

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WOW! This is so ethereal and so real at the same time.

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