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[ 2D ]'s avatar

I don't like to cuss much, but-- fuuuuck. 🤍

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Sometimes that's the only description you have for how feeling! 🩵 Thank you!

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Andrew Taylor's avatar

This is so powerful and well done. Incredible writing, I'm glad you finished it even through the difficulty.

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Thank you so much! This sits close to my heart! I'm glad I did too! 🩵

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Gahhhh this is so heart wrenching. I will hold this piece inside of it forever. So many perfect lines.

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Thank you so much! 🩵 This was a hard piece to finish.

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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

Gorgeously painful, relatable, and efficient writing. Grief distilled into a mere handful of words, strong enough to make you feel it again.

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Thank you so very much for your beautifully kind words! 🩵🥹

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

My community lost someone very recently. A father to four beautiful children. I feel this deeply right now.

Beautifully, heartbreakingly written.

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

I am so sorry for your loss. I sincerely hope this helped. 🩵🫂

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