This was so good! I love the way you told the story of the Magiri, how they had not been killed, but merely banished to another realm (The Veil). This pairs perfectly with another story earlier today that described the Magiri's downfall!
I really like where you went with this. I will be exploring this concept for sure in a future D'veen tale. Amazing entry!
Thank you so so much! There is much more to it! I didn't write about the waking dreams, there is a twist on this! It ties into how she shattered the veil. If you want to hear more let me know! 🩵
This was so good! I love the way you told the story of the Magiri, how they had not been killed, but merely banished to another realm (The Veil). This pairs perfectly with another story earlier today that described the Magiri's downfall!
I really like where you went with this. I will be exploring this concept for sure in a future D'veen tale. Amazing entry!
Thank you so so much! There is much more to it! I didn't write about the waking dreams, there is a twist on this! It ties into how she shattered the veil. If you want to hear more let me know! 🩵
Holy buckets this is amazing!
I had goosebumps! I love the exploration of bringing magic back to the world, the imagery was so perfect!
Oh wow thank you so much! I'm always so nervous about posting my pieces! 🥹🩵
The descriptions. The character building. The world building. My jaw is on the floor! I’m in love and obsessed 🤩
I'm in love and obsessed with your book teaser! That sneak peek is epic! So immersively delicious!